In my script, I actually didn’t really add to my quote setups, because I found that, if anything, I provided too much context for my quotes. I edited out some unnecessary descriptions of the narratives. I also took out a portion of my introduction that prematurely introduces a narrative- I wish I had taken it out of my final paper draft too before I submitted it. I also tried to make the conclusion more concise, because a lot of it is already summed up in the rest of the podcast.

I changed everyone’s names to pseudonyms (except for Brandt and Williams).